I work in my garden, alone, But for bees that communicate Satisfaction with my efforts. The neighbors whisper and watch, Looking for an error, a stagger, Never once caring for more than gossip. I live alone in a house of people, Never noticed, never seen, The dust is my intimate friend. I watch the sunset from my window, Its golden light illuminating my Loneliness, I wish and dream. I had a friend once, He as golden as the sun. He left like all the others, without a storm. He was beautiful, rich, Filled with ideas to make the world better. As my world collapsed in tears, he left. Gold sunshine will return at sunset, Not always there, but returning To give me a kiss of hope. The neighbors will talk, and I will freeze Like a rabbit before the fox. Let them talk, I am deaf to them now.(February 2nd, 2016)


(February 2nd, 2016)
Somber and powerful, well done!
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Nice images. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and find it relatable.
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Very well written. Really paints a picture.
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You’re good at writing, I liked it so much.
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Extraordinary! I like it!
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rewiew my first poem.if you may
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That is a beautiful poem. Wow
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Very well put!!
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wow! That was amazing!! 😀
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It’s like a treasure you keep in a treasure box deep down the dark soil. Deep and rich!
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This is magnificent, in my opinion
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Would please send readers to my blog
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great !!
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Such a beautiful poem.I can relate to it.I love watching the sunset, the orange sun against the pink-blue sky.It implores me to paint.It brings a flicker of hope and prepares me for the dark night.
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So much meaning, yet short & to the point. I love it! Thank you for sharing!
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Can it be reblogged on https://telefontakibi2015.wordpress.com/
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Beautifully explained a truth behind all those smiles
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i can relate to this poem..there times i feel all alone eventhough i am surrounded by many people.yes i experienced being left alone especially those people i never expect of leaving me.
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Amazing! Sadness is beautiful and loneliness is tragical…
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very sad but very true, it hurts.
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Beautiful ❤
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Wonderful, my dear. There is a tragic beauty to these words.
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I think this was very beautiful. It has something for everyone.
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this is amazing
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Hi
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I wish I had your prose! I put together words like I put together socks. Amazing!
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Nice and touched poem, feels like reading about myself.
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Reblogged this on OUT OF ME HEAD.
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It’s beautiful.
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Nice !!!
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Magnificent
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Well Written 🙂 Speechless 🙂
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Flawless, girl! Loved it!
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We find out how strong our mind is when alone.
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good words , good poem ❤️
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Simply our existential reality – ‘aloneness’ though is an illusion 🙂
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a heart felt poem about lonelines
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beautiful and amazing
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I ship you with all of the dust :3
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This is amazing! You are so talented!!
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Beautifully written! 🙂
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